Tommy Sharp
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Cookies hate Air Force dummies who get in the way....the pink bunnies must eat them!
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Post by Tommy Sharp on Jul 17, 2006 22:58:18 GMT -5
Watch the dust settle on the music box. oh it's so out of tune, and no longer plays. It was so long ago and the tune was so sweet. The sound made me hold my breath. It played for us, and us alone, when the sweet tune made me let down my gaurd you held his hand. The rage I had was fueled by his every living breath. I would up the music box for a final tune, and during it's sweet song I locked him in. The blood eagle fueled my rage, as he begged for his savior, but my rage will never die, as the final tune played, I laughedf at his pain. They broke down the door, as he father beat me his mother began to scream at the blood she saw, from which she barely recognized her son as the music box came to a soft halt. There sits the music box, where we used to dance, but no more, dances I've had. With dust on the floor, the blood black and dried, I have become so cold.....cold....cold...
Good, bad, or ugly, what do you monkies think?
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Starstreak Inashira
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I'm just your average misanthropic malady, so watch your step or I destroy you.
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Post by Starstreak Inashira on Aug 28, 2006 16:39:18 GMT -5
...I really need lessons to write like that... d**n. I'm nearly speechless...or is it type-less? But it's good.
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Post by Prez Sonya Sniper on Aug 29, 2006 13:33:55 GMT -5
its good but it could be better. And Starstrek, in time you will learn to write like that.
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Tommy Sharp
Captain
Cookies hate Air Force dummies who get in the way....the pink bunnies must eat them!
Posts: 115
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Post by Tommy Sharp on Aug 29, 2006 18:07:39 GMT -5
bite me air fairy!
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